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Another Butterfly

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:icq: Botanic Garden, Lisbon





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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This image is a little tricky to me. While I don't feel that it should have been declined in a group as you mentioned, but I do have some constructive feedback for you that hopefully will help.

As far as cropping goes, I think that it should either be cropped in farther on the left (cutting off more of the wing) or having MORE space on the left and top of the frame (so the butterfly is angled into the frame). The butterfly's head and the flower being so centered is a little off to me, but it's still a nice photo.

I like the colors and the clarity. I can't critique the specific technically aspects without knowing the exposure details, but the bokeh is nice. Well done <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>